Thread: LyLWuN vs L.I.
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Old 12-29-04, 05:52 PM   #23
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Voted For: L.I.

LylWuns Verse
this kid like an angry mexican, cuz 'I' see is this 'L' in this battle comin up short in form,
u messed with the wrong girl, or u didnt know who TO-PIC, oh yea....ALMOST PORN//
i get it but it was just weak like ...ok...

remember that? perverted it seems and a topical head? u a false-rhymer,
battlin me? i guess u didnt know 'what u was in for' like IN-MATES with ALZHEIMERS//
i liked this one...

this aint ya day, pimpin....wow this man can do topicals! seems he stay bitchin,
52 and 9? but check this out imma 'scratch ya record' like dj's mixin//
no...dj mixin shit is played and setup was eh...

how u conjure up them wins? i guess 'gatorades' not all thats in u, u stuck with the pipe inside-ya//
no wonder why this site is called RV, [url=http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168603]yall got nothin but ridaz//
nope...

overall had 1 good punch in my opinion but weak verse...

L.I.s verse
Quit ridin on L.I. I'm tired of it.. just simply lay off me bitch...
But since sex makes a winner.. its no wonder she's all over my dick...
eh it was ok in my opinion nothin too great

Battling the best.. you gotta be crazy if you plan on makin a name...
Cuz you made it prefectly clear that your name describes your brains...
...ok gettin better

Cut the cockiness bitch.. your ranked high among the greats, still takin flight?...
Cause last time I saw.. you didnt even make it into Legends on yo Home Site!...
lmfao...best punch and personal of the verse...

Sorry I had to merk the "best" from RW.. cause this "vet" aint even alright...
Bitch, the only time you were on top.. was in bed wit strobe last night...
wasnt as good as the last bar but good closer and punch none the less...

overall had better punches and hit harder then lylwuns...

no hate good luck to both
peace
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