Alphabetized- didn't know you was into topicals, glad to see you expanding your skills fams. I thought the flow had its smoothness in parts. and the story itself, i felt was thought out very deeply, not even the storyline, you sort of brought some clearity to it in the beginning and I could tell what was ahead. but it was that pure intellectual thought of the second verse that really held the dopeness. i liked the after life from faith line too. deep

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Civil.- to me, the picture had no point to the piece whatsoever.. but what you labeled as the beginning was dope man. the whole scene played out sick. I can tell your somebody i'm going to have to watch out for.. just that imagery that i know you can take up with the right wording and rhymescheme, its dangerous. and the thoughts about it.. just a bombardment of unstable emotions. It was a pretty crazy drop, and a nice read. I'd like to see you twist a topic up more in future weeks.


shit i consider both yall threats. this is one league i aint gon sleep in.
v/Civil
keep dropping dope