For me to give critism truly would be the only thing i could do for OMB didn't really know him like that i just kno he was one of my rivals when it came down to who could multi better that's all i know of him to be honest...

....now for your feed, your emotion is basic, imagry is basic, vocabulary is horrible and in lamest terms childish like, structure was below average pretty much not a piece worth dedication but if it was sincere and from the heart no amount of negative feed could effect your views so i give you props.

elevation is a must.

__________________

crhyme sindicate
Open Mic Hall Of Famer