yo man i dont know what to say about this let me break it down:

STRUCTURE: very bad, u need to up on structure...make each line end at the same spot either add or take words out and use creative wordplay

Multies: Multies is what you need to make your rhyme flow better and be more enjoyable to read...im assuming you know how to do that...if not p/m me and ill help u out

VOCAB:your vocab was kinda played....u used big words that didnt go wit the rhyme.....for ex:
"why do u think law enforcement agencies, put da signs that say CAUTION/
all ova my body, cuz they kno im a part of the gangsta nation/"

no multis no rhyme scheme.....and ur lines is to stretched out...no hate just given proper feed. up on all that and ull be iight....1

RTF ON MY SIG LINKS