It kinda reminds me of my own style at times...dunno if that's a good thing though haha...

What I think that really makes this piece is the simplicity of this poem. Don't get me wrong, it's not a bad thing. Not at all in fact! You pictured the situation as it is, no needless imagery or over the top emotion. Just stating facts in a direct way and I loved that about this piece. I mean of course you used images to portray a sort of image but you didn't make it too complex. I like the direct way you approach the topic, that's my favo aspect of this poem.

Props

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