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Old 11-09-06, 06:57 PM   #14
Ysdat
Whys That?
 
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Sir smash alot, you sound like your reading it not rapping it... mumbled "break your head on the mirror you got bad luck" Your seperating each syllable to much, wtf @ the end.. your dub isnt even placed correctly. In general this is weak and some what wack man.
Your not flowing decent, your sound like your reading it.

Ebrics- you come in with a decent flow, good emotion "pussy little kids line is slightly off flow, your rushed through it, coulda made it seem like a flow switch up, but it sounded more rushed.
Punches are alot more apparent than your opponents, overall this is a one sided battle.
decent drop.