Nice drop, the flow was dope. One thing though, it's hard for people to read big blocks of text. Next time try to structure it something like this:

listen up......ayo im tryin to find my WAY TO ACHIVE,
but every move im MAKIN IT SEEMS
like im doin it with WEIGHTS ON MY FEET,
and i feel like every dude's HATIN ON ME,
and im tryin to follow the RIGHT ROAD,
with no LIFE BOAT and theres a LAKE IN THE STREET/
pluss i have the SHAKIEST DREAMS that WAKES ME FROM SLEEP,
and my head hurts and my chest ACHES WHEN I BREATH/
i think gods WAITIN FOR ME...
im tryin to LIVE RIGHT, but i LIVE LIFE so DANGEROUSLY
its like im RUNNIN AROUND and every GUN IN THE TOWN is AIMIN AT ME,
i think they tryin to CHANGE MY BELIVES as im just tryin to STAY ON MY FEET
this road is a LONG SWERV and every WRONG TURN is AIMIN AT BEEF,
and thats no STRANGER TO ME, but i dont need no one WAIVIN POLICE
and SAYIN ITS ME, so thats why i dont try and get BRAVE WITH THE HEAT,
i just LAY ON MY KNEES and keep PRAYING FOR PEICE.....damn/

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