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Old 03-17-05, 12:07 AM   #9
Os1ris
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It's obvious K.onflikt took this H-N-I-C's verse was good for his skill level his imagery was alright and the story wasnt that bad but then compared to K's verse it just didn't compare on the same level
"..Now My girl lay motionless in the Mustang covered in blood stains..
..Told me that she Must Bang, wasnt scared to die, she loved pain..
..Tips hit the gas tank..exploded..Flames Quickly left her ass Blank..
..Police quickly came, Tightly Secured As if it was The Dundas Bank.."
^ I liked this part of your verse good imagery vocab and all overall this was a good battlle between the both of yall but K took it.

Vote - K.onfliktz
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