I supremely suck at battles, I can't even seem to grasp the basics, I mean, I got beaten by Iceman187, its horrible, I'll post my best battle(in my eyes), it's probably shit to you, though.

kid you couldn't be a rapper in your wildest dreams,
unless you covered a condom,
but even then your torn at the seams
its true it seems, rappers and actors are one of a kind
i didn't believe it until i heard you screamin' "line"!!!"
because of that, id be amazed if you ever dropped a fast rhyme
even if you could speed up time, its like you spittin in rewind...
its been defined, your clean kid, better suited for youth outreach
cause when you dissin, its like your spittin' with all out bleach,
kid im willin to teach, but are you willing to learn
how to spit a verse hot enough to make a mans flesh burn
its comin' close to your turn, your insides prolly churn with fear
cause this is like tyson vs. evander,
your outmatched, Except i hope you bite off my ears,
cause its clear...
you try to spit intelligently, but it comes off closer to selfishly
But your styles outdated kid, you be sounding like those elvis freaks
i've seen ya battles, you like to hog the attention
spit 40 bars, even tho nobody reads the extra 30 bar extention
so go ahead kid, spit your verse, act like your smart
no matter how advanced ya vocab is,
your still a name on the lyrical doctors chart

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