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Ight, pretty decent track................
verse 1 - Spul came pretty well, the best i've heard from him, but vocab was real general. it made your flow seemed ok, but nothing spectecular. So try to improve on quality of what you say, instead of just keeping a tight flow.
verse 2 - Damn man, it seemed that you had running water in the background, lol. But pretty decent drop. Quality was horrible. But your flow was original and perceptive. Very nice wordplay.
verse 3 -vocals too loud, someone probably already mentioned that. Decent drop also, but you were forcing a lot of your lines. Vocab and metaphors were good. I like the virgin mary line, pretty good.
Overall -
7.5/10
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