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Old 10-30-05, 08:57 AM   #17
Daubs
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When he attacks, I'ma react calmly in this cold place
I ain't batting an eyelid, I'm damn well batting his whole face
I'ma let ya soul waste, maybe ya felt good 'fore this started
But after I rip ya organs out...
....................................it'll be hard not to be disheartened
Heard Mim's audios? Wackness to me, but some might care for it
They listen intently with heart and mind...
...............................................cos their ears can't bear the shit
I can almost say ya raps are out of this world, n ya skilled
Cos if ya voice was pitched any higher...
..............................it'd escape earth's gravitational field
Plus, seen Mim's pic? Get ya weight up 'fore ya start shit
There's enough skin n bones on display...
.........................................to start an ivory/furs market
And that 9th kid's garbage, I'ma smack the punk hard
But at least he KNOWS his place...
........................................chillin in a fuckin junk yard

6 quotables

DTR

Punk ya rep ain't clean, you get blamed for bad shaped votes
So I'm a put you in a chokehold that you can't escape, goat
And your ugly as fuck too, no one's wants to hang with this gay
N' MAYBE you wouldn't be the last resort...
... if ya looks didn't scare the tide away
Cuz dawg ya fat n' like goodies while I like a good book that's jumpin'
But when I think of a best seller, I just think of ANY you're locked up in


3 quotables

TEAM TOTAL: 9.


9th

I've been known to show backbone when brawlin' in the verbal way
And you're my necks victim...until I crack ya vertebrae
Plus you fight like a pussy, throw kicks at the guys n'
Have 'em catchin' enough foot-balls to win the damn Heisman
Mim didn't need your help in PLL, leave him alone
'Cuz even Tom Hanks knows bitches need A League of Their Own
Vaskez? Shit, you don't want in this war zone, g
You just call a Trus...
...and ask him to come home 'cuz you're lonely
Since your girl dipped, and showed up at my house bare
We went nuts...
...or at least she liked to Planter mouth there
Face it, you're a loser, and I'm sorry my truth's ownin'
But you're such a long distance from winnin'...
...L.I. charged you for roamin'
I schooled you fucks in text, all your shit's lookin' forced
And now I just got you tuition that you never took this course


7 quotables


Mim

That shit is fucking GARBAGE.. and I now know that ya rhymes losing
At least you said it was for a laugh......cause that's all that I'm doing
Just ridiculous... but your elevation is slow... why does this herb write?
Vas been texting for over 6 MONTHS and STILL can't rhyme words right
But I thought we were keeping it clean?.. I knew nothing would stay fine
And I would follow DaTrus..
..if I wanted my verse to be generic punches and played lines
Prewritten bullshit.. trash.. but in the PLL, I did ask you for help one time
And I only asked you to mod in hopes that you wouldn't post a punchline
Savin the league.. and lookin at the sponsors, it's ill.. but whats worse is
You're only a Mix Champ..
..cause you put together the best lines from other people's verses
Some herb shit.. you were predicted to lose.. you wanna know why, kid?
Cause I've done better then you in EVERY fucking league that I've tried in
Should be hidin.. Instead of stepping to us.. you suck, dont you see queer
Your leaving such a Yung Impression..
..I thought I was battling the team that should be here

7 quoatables.


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Wow, mims verse on DTR was fuckin heavy, no hate but 9th and mim clearly had the more quotables.
You seemed better last week than this week cask, sorry NO HATE.

props all.
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