Vango- nice story lines. very flowing and easy to read
was building up to a much better close...
i like the way you use evey last bit of space
as if you got a hundred more lines to throw down

Mad Man- also a very good verse. although it was a little off
and uneasy to read in some places.
you had a good story but i feel Vango had
more of a climax ending

Overall- very good by both. structure and flow otherwise good

Vote- Vango. for the use of space

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