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Old 06-14-05, 12:50 PM   #14
Sixth Sense
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Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
nice opener 8/10
Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you
Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!"
ok nice 6/10
Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip
Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship
lol nice wordplay and good punchline 10/10
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
ok nice 6/10
Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter
I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order
lol nice 8/10
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
lol nice wordplay there wit the collar 10/10
Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire
I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire
ok nice 6/10
Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook
Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook'
ok another wordplay but not that effective 8/10
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth
ok good punchline 8/10
9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing
So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king
ok yea no self-glory but not a good closer 6/10

Overall-76/100
Nice man alot of wordplay personals and alot of effective lines ur verse was very structurized and had 2 perfect 10 counts that is a good job man the vocabulary was ok the flow was ok as well as i said structure was good and punches as u may already kno it was hott man keep doin what ya doin man 4real



Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
ok opener 6/10
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
ok nice wordplay wit cats and paws 8/10
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
ok nice 6/10
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
ok nice line 6/10
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
ok hott punch there 10/10
You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection
So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question
ok nice 6/10
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
lol nice word play and punch 10/10
Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter
I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper
lol nice punch man good one 10/10
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
kinda stretched but still packed a little more 8/10
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
lol man thats a good one man best line in both verses 10/10


Overall-84/100 damn u had a little weak lines but u had like 4 perfect punches thats good man and that closer was the best ive seen from both verses so good job on that and structure and flow was a lil off and vocabulary was ok so good job man keep doin ur thing as well

Scores:
Personals-JR
Punches-JR
Effectiveness Punches-9D
Most Effective Line-9D
Flow-none
Structure-JR
Vocab-vone
Points on verse-9D

this was a tie battle and cuz it was a tie im gon have to go wit the points on the verse and 9D had the most so my vote is gonna go to 9D cuz he had the most effective verse but both competitors did their thing good job to both competitors
v/9th degree
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