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Old 12-15-04, 12:23 AM   #14
JPoll
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here is my breakdown, as always no hate...its just a battle...

first up is Mike...
The thing is, you fucking ugly, ya bitches is years behind
Only reason you like the Knicks...is cuz u cant get wit dimes
7 blah, decent opening punch...not your best...
Ike is a softy, I'll come on RV to slay this whore
It's not a gay marriage...when i say he jus cant engage in war
5 this was terribly worded, and therefore ruined an already sort of played subject
You scared of Mike Hawk, why wont you tell us
If i called u out, you would duck me so much, it'll make Donald jealous
6 i've read almost this same punch before, a few times
Nasty bitch...dont nobody wanna visit ya house
Ever since you were born..thats when they been callin it the Dirty South
6...isn't so coherent of a thought process...doesn't flow at all
Ike, I got big guns....and you know what I mean
When I say, youll make it to the next round...........
....if you not dead after the first 16.
5 wow, you are better then gun punches as your closer...stale mike, stale...you should have brought it back to the days of the lll, your style was sick...pretty just no wit in this battle..

Ike

Even if HAWKS sight are in black 'n' white, he's "gonna see im nice"
might try to imitate jordan, but nobody "wanna be like mike"
6 very played, although this was a different spin...you should work on only have one strong punch in a bar, rather then two sorta blah punches...
may think you nice, but only to "yaself it might seem"
you say you tight, despite your record bein "twelve 'n' nineteen"
7 this is so true, records don't matter, but it was worded so well, that the punch came off strong
just comprehend you cant step, you "see my spits is crimes"
ripped up....hawk gets lit up like "trees at christmas time"
7...its played also, but because its the season its a lil different, for playing off the atmosphere he gets marks
IKE is spittin gifted lines, that rip this "misfits mind"
and leave this chumps frame crooked like a "lipstick line"
7.5 this is a stupid 'hurt you' punch, but the wordplay is real nice, worded well...ike has some potential...
I choose to elude this dude, this verse is a "lesson you might use"
you's a fool if you thought i'd lose to a "freshman in high school"
6.5 this was sorta blah, you shoulda played off freshmen, more os....

Mike=30
Ike=34

vote Ike

Mike you are easily better then ike, although he has some wit, he just needs to learn how to make original punches...you just didn't spend enough thought on this verse...you came almost equally played, although with less wit...

no hate boys
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