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Voted For: J Summers

Vote...J SUMMERS

Let's start with J summers...

Beats pretty dope actually, no need for the chorus just burned time but hey it got me into the song a little more. Not much though...

Made you famous, said yo name like i'm helping yall = dope i chuckled a lil bit

beating the shit out this kid in public like bad parents = funny not lol but funny

i'ma get some brain while you gon sit in the whip = ok. I'm not much for "i'm fuckin your girl punchlines" but the way you said it made me laugh cause you sounding like you were his parent punishing him...(i could see it in my head like "Go wait in the car! and you're pointing at him)

First off it feels like that was more chorus than verse, second it felt like you weren't feeling the verse at all. Your adlibs sound more enthusiastic then your verse. Next, those were your best punchlines but they were literally all i could speak for because the rest of your verse was a weight. Not hating but the rest seemed pretty played. The touching like preachers line, the sore dick line, the you can hold my chain line, bifocle(i know i spelled it wrong) and chicken line. I'm guessing you weren't trying very hard though. Anyway you could've performed much better.

Young Kidd...Oh great another rapper with young in his name...

You literally sound like a zombie which is killing your performance.

Ja Rule and lil wayne lines = Meh... If you had intensity that MIGHT have been dope but not quite. I hate wayne but opening for Ja (hater or not) you have to give it up for that.

Fall line = played

Michigan line = Almost got a chuckle so it's an ok, once again lack of intensity

practice dying line = ok killed by delivery

Summers started big but went to county and became a bitch = i actually laughed out loud, it was actually fortified by your lack of intensity somehow

better off dead line= repeated ourselves didn't we

Nas murdered Jay line = I took offense to it as a jay fan, but seeing as i took offense to it, it must've been good. I literally didn't see it coming, iono if it's been used in other summers battles but i haven't heard it so the ruling on the field stands

Summary

This is a hard one to call for me. It didn't seem like either of you were into it much, but i'm going to have to give this one to...(damn i acutally had to think about it again hold on....)

Iono both your voices annoy me slightly (I'm really not trying to mock you guys) Summers...

That really was a hard choice but summers got me into the song more so i guess in the end the chorus did help. but with a little more delivery i think young kidd could've won.