Cho:

The flow was on point throughout the entire track so nice going on that, may put some more emphasis on certain words or phrases but overall, you had it down. The lyrics itself were good, I like how you built it up towards the ending. Like how you added that last phrase with good emotion. A hook would've made this even better though, didn't consider it? Nice track all in all, maybe a bit short though...would've loved to hear more.



Jay:

Wooooooo *shakes to the beat* Haha, I love this beat first of all. And you picked like the perfect beat for this topic, good choice Got a great energy on this track, verses were on point for real. I hear the do what you do part in the bridge, good going on that one as well. Stays in the mind, catchy hook, catchy shit as a whole. Feelin this for real, *still shaking* lmao



Aight, got two different tracks right here...got one deep, meaningful one by Cho. His bad aspects were lack of a hook and the length of the track, could've been much better if he added more to the song. Then you got the shake track by Jay, got a great energy on it. Only bad thing is lyrical substance but with a track like this, the only goal is to make chicas shake and you succeeded

So vote: Jay 286, no hate Cho, you had some good shit as well man

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