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Old 08-20-08, 04:13 PM   #9
Brydon
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Who the fuck?
I peepd ya matches - Ionno wtf you thought, cuz'..
But if ya shit 'sfeared - then my shit's baseball bats and golf clubs..

Good opener..................

When I pull out - I'mma bust until this fag screams out he'on want nomore..
I ain't perverted - we all just hope I creep ya verses out, and evasively shut the door..

not bad....................

Forfeit or feel four fists til' ya eye gleams..
I'll make it Sting til it rocks facepaint, does the Scorpion Death Lock, and skydives in the rinnng..

was'nt feelin.................

Ngga - my fuckin' fist is just viscous and raw..
I'll beat you to within the inch of your life..
...........THEN feed that baby dick to my dog..

Nah...............................

Those played concepts can't save you now..
You're old shit is a hoax..
..Infact, I swore they were drowned at a Salem Trial..

Those played concepts can't save you now..
You're old shit is a hoax..
..Infact, I swore they were drowned at a Salem Trial..

no..................................

I hate you clown - and the set-up of ya rhymes, should be burned alive..
My winning votes here - 'slike heads usin' ya style - it'll stop around '05..

no....................

so pleeeaaase - I'll be moving on to the next round to make heads fly..
While this ngga here's tryin his hardest find a dope way to word "Ed Die"..

poor finish too.....................

vs

ya chicks packin baggage, dont' brag bitch I'd rather jus fued
shit faggot..even ya girls Figure of speech is fucking fatter than you

kinda funny..............

noone even noticed your whore, shes ugly an I'll be boastin some more
ya know its reached its Boiling point..when ya girl's STILL coated wit Sores

ok................................

faggot thinks he's a movie star, Samuel Jackson?..you ain't real so move
butt Eddie's in Shaft?..but backwards that statement simply reveals the truth

lol liked.......................

while your compared bitch..'Eddie' we know your gay cuz ya files coherent
take ya outa special Ed,..leave ya wit Die like queers usually style their hair wit

hahaha funny.......................

all that streched shit, lines stickin out.. that'll just cause you to lose son
I know ma fists Structure verse pretty hard..but didn't realize youd fail to use one

not bad...................

its new homo..you want in vtl? you want out?..so choose a week to quit
an I wish you'd Make up your mind..but then it'd be familiar with ya cheeks an lips

lol funny again.....................

your weak admit, styles legit? I'll pummel you til ya head rings like this
try to copyright..but to mimic me ya gotta learn how to NOT swing like a bitch

not great but not bad..........................


Ok gotta do this quick coz iv gotta shoot out...........
Eddie you started really well but after 2 bars you seemed to jus fall off and your structure was really bad.
Lay your verse had many lines that made me chuckle, your wording was good but alittle off maybe a couple of times but still think you took this one by a long margine.
Eddie your verse lacked wording and structure and general punches after the first few or so.
More to come from both im sure but iv gotta say alittle dissapointing from eddie after nick's praise before you dropped, although it was a good drop from you lay i'd say you have a few more levels to rise up yet.

Peace.
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