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Old 01-22-05, 01:02 PM   #11
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Socrates
Look, Pop is whack, my worst punches is stoppin him
This bitch is so Scrappy that Scooby Doo adopted him
->>lmao...9/10
Ya my homie and all, but ya whack, yea you heard me
Winnins ya Maine goal but you’re stuck in New Jersey
->>pretty good...7/10
Ya records whack, plus ya garbage, listen dog ya hated
Pop couldnt create a buzz...unless the drink is carbonated
->>meh...5/10
You ugly fuck, a fuckin joke, bout to get mangled duke
Fuck living, even ya sweater is trying to strangle you
->>needed mor syllables in the second line...plus ive heard similar...5/10
Son is fat as fuck, excersizing is what he needs to learn
I dont care...but hes too fat to get as far as hes concerned
->>it cant just be wordplay...its gotta make sense too...5/10
Look son, I dont even need techs, my rhymes flaming
i’ll hand you an L and I dont even KNOW sign language
->>there you go...7/10
I looked at my verse and shrugged, almost got rid of it
n’ let you be the KORV since your fat ass is like 90% of it
->>setup line was mehness...second line was decent...6/10
Let me get out slow and have you get it...U-R-WHACK!
Nigga i’ll hit you wit enough Clipse to be sued by Startrack
->>not bad...6/10
You wanna hang son? Well lemme give you the noose
Plus I got niggas that’ll Hop On Pop faster than Dr. Suess
->>cool cool...7/10
Plus ya girls a ho, son I aint fuckin her regardless
Cuz shes had more tricks b/w her legs than slam dunk contests
->>lol...7/10
Here comes another fat joke, but I swear look at the guy
First nigga I gave an L and it wasn’t a big enough size
->>nice nice...a few too many fat jokes but this was one of the better ones...7/10
->>overall...71/110 (65%)

Pop Lotty
It's sad that...
...Soc is 16…but dude ain’t got no life fasho…
Cuz in his pic, he was a lil too close to that 10 yr. old
->>blah...4/10
Talking bout how you a pimp, you know you’re lying cuz….
Told em you being gay is a joke, some ppl still don’t believe it was
->>you just said it...you didnt flip it at all...5/10
Broke nigga, need the money, you fresh? That’s a fable
This battle could down to the wire…not, Soc can’t afford cable
->>there you go...7/10
On my dick for the longest, already aware that he cant contest
Just Sunday he was making threads about how him and I are the best
->>blah...5/10
Mad on AIM when Dimez was givin me attention, biggest clown in here
Soc, theres more fish in the sea…I hope you go drown in there
->>stretched...meh...5/10
You have no life, don’t want me to put you on blast dude
Exposin ya aliases will be more of a embarrassment than losin the battle
->>decent...6/10
Can’t see me bitch, you’ll get left with 2 swelled up lips
But your known for breaking niggas…since you’re on a ‘Feeble’ dick
->>ok...6/10
You better be on ya A game, and bring your best at me
Cuz we even in notes and letters….that S always comes after P
->>oh so played...5/10
I’m already well prepared for Soc, ready to leave em roasted
Cuz he’ll prolly want me to review his verse on AIM before he posts it
->>lol...7/10
And good look at the voters list, I guess schema noticed too…
…cuz we all know who ‘will a pear’…and vote for you
->>your best line by far...8/10
You took a beating, now pack ya bags and ya pride witcha
I haven’t seen anything this ugly…till I zoomed in on ya picture
->>weak closer...5/10
overall...63/110 (57%)


Pop I see your creativity is there but this verse felt rushed and socs felt like he took a long time on it...you shouldve tried to make every bar a killer...if you had dropped 11 "will a pear" quality bars you wouldve won here but you didnt and unfortunately for you he won here.

Congrats to Socrates...500 bucks dude...time to jump around your room gettin hype...you earned it.

v/Socrates
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