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Old 06-03-07, 11:38 AM   #15
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dude listen, you must be on mo pot than stove tops in soup kitchens//
put the duce(gun/2) to ya eye, now you got a 2 vision//
decent start...
you aint seein' me lyrically anyway, so what'chu visionin' for?//
i'll cut both ur pupils in half and turn your vision to(2) 4//
aight...
as for(4) that i'll chop them in half than lyrically get'chu ate(8), &//
do the math on that, we aint equal, no available equation//
nah didnt rhyme or connected...
get it?,after that'chu know you hurtin' man// *hahaha*
u live by me,so now i can say that i've bodied-more(balti/body-more) in murderland(MD)//
dont explain yaself in ya bar it mess up your structure and flow...
its gonna take more than one(2+) to take me down, but'chu(1) willin'?//
its an exact metaphor of your name, 1 dimensional, but yet 2 visions//
eeh could of been worded different... but aight..
you finished, time to stick 'em & see if he still bleedin'(food)//
pull 'em out the oven(battle) and let the btr family get ta feastin'//
nah...
and nowonder you named ur album that, its no secret//
cuz all you do is suck&blow(head) just like a weed hit//
aight ending...

i've seen way better from you... you focused to much on hes name should of had like 1 or 2 bars about hes name then switch toy our regular self....




Don, ya whack, had to say it fast 'cuz I'm personal when bust raps,
& I don't find you threatening, even tho 14/14 of ya lines was just that.
aight start...
..... Let's all laugh at this fake fuck, I got the shotgun, still loaded an,
I'd be cockin' your brain but I don't wanna make it feel whole again.......
lol gay-line but decent...
My wordplay is gold, contradiction but he'll be scarred for the worst//
And It's like you dropped 14 fake lines, with 28 REAL bars in your verse//
nah weak..
Rofl.. DON, in MY state? Fuck it I'll rip this kid into sheets,
With card all over the place, 52 people have a chance of gettin' a piece.
aight..
I laugh, smile, and strut, how this fag's mild as fuck,
With everyone of his punches below the waist, 'cuz naturally trash piles up.
aight...
That's 10 lines that I keyed, you think you'll match me when I speak more reason?
Please give me a RE-RE-RE-match with this guy so I can keep him cut from the
league for SEASONS..
aight..
Fuckin' with 2v, that's like treason, I see through this kid when I pass,
Like I'll knock his lights out, break ya chin and my fist's covered in glass.
aight ending...

vote: 2v for being more creative with hes verse... still lacked a bit but had a few decent punches....
don you focus to much on hes name which hurt you at the end...


vote: 2v