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Old 03-03-09, 07:04 PM   #6
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dope battle boys
Alpha man that was sick....

theres no time to grow frigid....
... when the norm is transformed to warm

I liked that line the most, flowed and ryhmed well, really liked your use of vocab added alot to your verse.


Civil, wasn't sure what to expect from you I never saw you topical, but that was dope......It was sad man, but that was the feeling, it wasn't as complex but was consise, I liked it a lot

Now I’m living in a foster home. And all the love and fears combined
Because No one has any idea what that kind of loss, does to a fierce mind.
Cheers Why? I'm all alone in this place, everything cold will be mild
And I’m no longer the only child, feels like the only guide is fate

those were dope




this was a sick battle, really close but ima give it to Civil, just think he was able to come across more effectivly, all though alphas was dope too.
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