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Old 06-18-04, 10:55 AM   #12
Lyricide
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Shadows Edge
i didnt feel the story much, the feeling just wasnt there, good vocab and medi wordplay...flow was tight as it was short bars but still coo verse, i sw sum nice imagery too brought forth by you...ryhmes were alright

The Great Harold:
vocab was alright, but i think u brought the topicnicer, i felt ur verse, better imagery, kept me reading, flow was on too, ryhmes were tight, but it hink i really felt this verse more..sum nice standout lines

vote- the great harold