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Old 08-23-05, 06:12 PM   #16
Magic5
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First verse - SPuL ripped it like pancakes nah mean? Quality was cool.. flow was pretty nice.. your emotion in the tracks has gotten better.. decent delivery..

Second verse - lmfao @ how the quality is trash.. vocals are a little too loud.. ehh.. flow is decent.. your emotion has improved..

Third verse - quality is decent enough.. flow is pretty good.. you need to work on your emotion and stuff.. its all good though..

Hook - pretty catchy.. nah mean?

Overall, decent track.. I got to say SPuL had the best verse and shit.

But, its all good like pancakes nah mean? (FUCK SAUSAGES)
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