The beat starts off pretty cool. I think I got the same strings in GB if I'm not mistaken. Your vocals need to turn up a slight bit like 2 dB's. The flow sounded on but your mic is stripping a lot of the body out of your voice. I'd pump this in my car if the quality was on point. The hook's pretty good and actually sounds like a hook, not just more rhymes. There's slight places where the flow hiccups, but it's over-all written to the beat no doubt. The only thing I coulda asked for (aside from the quality) is that the flow in the last verse was different form the two prior ones. Thadaboudit. Peace.

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