ehh... Any poetry with swearing is not poetry... And i don't like your approach to it.. Your structure was nasty looking. It was deep, but it was expressed wrong. You had a lot of anger, maybe too much... but thats just my opinion. And though you say we are racist you are just as racist... Obviously... And you cant say you arent racist... because look at that.. LOL... shaky drop...

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