heard this beat before.....d block maybe?

para....flow has gotten better....need some more hi's in your vocals so theyll stand out more....need to be mixed a lil better........

other than that...i have no complaints about it...


hook..i dunno..just not feelin it...


2nd dude....your coo....but u need to let it out a lil more....you gotta decent voice n shit...but be a lil more loud...flow is coo....emotion is koo....just need to deliver it a lil better...u got a lot of potential man...


pro....still need to up that flow some man....your getting better.....but just keep tryin to up the flow.......until u get it at a point u need to be at

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