okay...this is my break down

Acuity. your track was okay but I really wasnt feeling the beat and the hook. I couldn't understand what you were saying most of the time either. But I listened close though and you had some good multis but it sounded like you couldn't catch your breath so it messed with your flow. The lyrics at time whent off your topic too. You get a 6.5/10

Implicit.
Your approach at this was different. Most people would have talked about they own life and growing pains in the beginning. But your shit was tight. The lyrics was nice and on point here. Your Hooks ok, could have been a bit better though. the 2nd verse was really what got this for me though. All in all your shit was tight and you get a an 7.5/10

V/Implicit

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..