Kesse:

dope verse. You got the vocabulary on lock, and the imagery was good because you got more detailed than others do. Even if you arent describing a certain scene, everyone could paint the picture of the scene in their mind. Thats a true writers gift. Emotion was perfect, not too much but just enough. You stayed on topic the way through pretty consistent. Fell off in 1 or 2 places but besides that your verse was dope.

overall : 8/10

Drama Queen:

Im sorry to say but this is one of the worst topicals i have seen from you. #1. you had the same problem as Konfliktz.. you werent on topic at all. If i didnt know the topic by reading your verse i would have guessed it was about domestic violence. You didnt pull yourself back on topic at all and i know you can. Decent emotion the imagery was great. You were consistent just not with the topic. Decent verse, expected more though.

Overall: 6.5/10

vote: Kesse

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