Tree Houses Verse


I mean it's funny DTH picked this, it fits this G dude
'Cause like the greenhouse phillys ass is seethrough
Decent opener, nice to setup hotter things to come
Noone'll partake because your ideas never work
'cept when u took every color in the pic and made a gay pride shirt
didn’t flow well, but because the concept wasn’t delivered, I don’t really feel this punch
Watch ya eatin' habits, looks like explosions are happenin
'Cause the inside of the greenhouses fogged over from flatulence
Lol, this is decent, kinda funny
n' ya living arrangements couldn't be worse, it is the poorest
i mean grow trees not an entire fucking forest
Haha im feeling this, dope punch to me on the topic
N' its no suprise or shock that i have stumped ya dude
cause compared to your flower bed a garage looks comfortable.
Naw, flow doesn’t sound good to me, structure is meh and it doesn’t seem like a serious closer..


Hard Hitting Bars-1
Decent Bars-2
Bars Needed To Be Improved-2




Green Houses Verse


ancel is slippin n all funny shit aside, man ya crib be trippin..
n i'd do the knock knock who's there joke.. but ya front door is missin
not feeling this, the flow was just too off for me…
ya crib is hollow nigga, empty as fuck, dudes feelin the wind yo
so step ya game up to the third floor.. then walk out the window
Decent I guess…still better flow would make this overall better
gotta be a sin bro, green house'll straight murder son then stop..
while taking out all your home support.. since X marks the spot
Decent again, still nothing special too me
try n make it past a regular season, n u kno ya egos hurt n sore..
when i can make more wordplay off tree < then u've been in before
again the delivery isn’t there for me, u need the flow n multies to make the concept go together…
alotta people like hope, all sayins are never true, so brother ride
n this pic goes to prove the grass is NEVER greener on the other side
your best bar of battle easily, and the first time in awhile I saw someone have a good closer, most people fall off


Hard Hitting Bars-1
Decent Bars-2
Bars Needed To Be Improved-2


Overall:

Best use of bars-Tie
Punches-Tie
Flow-Tree House
Opener-Tree House
Closer-Greenhouse
Mettas-Tie


Vote-on the real thisis a very close battle…almost to close to call….but I have to give it to tree house for coming with better delivery and a decent opener compared to greenhouses below average one…