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Word Daz this was a dope peice..
i was really feeling it , you had some dope punchlines
some nice personals... your structure was good ..
everything was going well for you on this key..
I felt you could have used alittle more personals ... maybe slay'd xcell alittle more
but it was good , overall i liked it alot , seen alot better from you but it was just an free verse , so i cant really judge it that much .
so..overall ...Nice job daz , hope to see another drop from you later on ,
Keep it up
ps: Drop a link please
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