lol, ignore what I said on AIM. I'm an idiot and it usually takes some time for me to understand what the writing is about, if I ever do.

You asked about the content. I think it's really good. Everybody should take a look at themselves the way you described in this writing.

"look into they eyes of all people you see
and say to yourself .not one is like me.
think of the artist that constructed such"

I think I sent those things to you on AIM. Thats the lines that stood out to me most. I do think about those things, like I said. I like the ending on it too. I wasn't expecting you to tell me to think about myself. I know you're waiting for this response so I'll go ahead and post it up for you.

I thought this was a really good writing though. Different than the ones I've been reading on here. Keep posting more of your stuff.