Interesting topic.

Final- Decent piece overall. Some of the lines seemed forced, but overall everything went well. Not a big twist. Vocab was fine and same with everything else. Nothing that great or anything that stood out.

Nos- You are one sick individual, lol. Overall I felt your creativity was a lot better and overall you followed the topic better. Nothing that special again, but a little better then final's.

v-Nos

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