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Old 06-28-06, 04:01 AM   #9
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Pent this my dawg unreal he the SHIT man so dont get it twisted....

ok this battle was great both came string and very well balanced in vocab and flow and depth of emotion.


ok pent yes you had somewhat of a rhymescheme but at some point your really fell of and your opener and closer were both bad...but i felt you had emoion and vocab and proffesional develpment of delivery and creative writting.

7/10

unreal you came well nice opener but closer was meh...your verse was nicely complexed and creative aswell but your emotion it fel justa little but you picked it up later as you went along so word up to that!

7.5/10

ok i vote real but this aint for reasons on him being my homie i just felt he had a better and more all around better verse.
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