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Old 02-22-09, 01:03 AM   #2
Its CJ
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From: V.a.
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Yea man that was good.good rhyme Scheme. you should put the words to a track too. the only part i thought was kind've weak was the middle verse
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It sucks having a gun, because it comes with responsibility
And it's that same thing that can haunt, and its killing me
Wanted for three murders, I had the fucking guy
Standing right in front of me, looking me in the eye
Almost as if to say "Im READY TO DIE!"...
... but it's a lie ...
So at gunpoint I scrample for thought, but heres the plight
I have the Green light to kill, but do I read him his rights?

but other then that it was good. keep at it bro
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