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Originally Posted by Alphabetized
After the shots fired...
I just lay and reminice with quivering lips, amiss
Not if I would of missed but why I didn't take the risk
This shit? Is it worth it? Cuz now i'm feeling worthless
I'm told I did the right thing...
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Dope entry, like the buidling
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With the judgement I lack, I struggle to keep my head intact
Knowing that after the shot's fired, I can never get it back
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Feelin da hook
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So at gunpoint I scrample for thought, but heres the plight
I have the Green light to kill, but do I read him his rights?
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im feelin this, this is a nice touch, good way to end the second verse.
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But heres the truth, the moment I saw him I checked my eyes
And confirmed to myself it was someone I recognized
someone I couldn't despise, so instead I stood speechless
You might say I'm feeble, but how would you meet this?
So as I took no action, the crook got to actin
Whipped the heat out quick and I saw it flashin
My reaction? A disaster, my sorrow's got me mad
Cuz now i'm a failure as a cop, as well as a dad
And after that? I couldn't live with myself.. so I stopped
And I put the gun to my temple and I finished the job
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third verse is where you shine in my opinion... this on poiint here, i love imagery and the flow of the piece is dope. keep droppin homeboy stay up.
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