Thread: DRAG~ON vs DON
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Old 08-02-04, 09:42 PM   #5
DON
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fuck i screwed up my verse here is the real one i accidently cliked in the wrong spot HERE IS THE REAL VERSE

an addictions an affliction poisonin mans mind...
this day and age the crack rock takes up a druggies mind...
but theres a fine line between addict and user...
addicts beat their wives for money to use her...
these users are kids who hear and see on tv...
and they hear these rappers say smoke this shit of you wana be me...
well heres a story of a boy who heard this message and answered...
he was 9 and depressed his only parent was ridden of cancer...
he wathces the tv and hears about these addictions...
so he stumbles up the steps and enters into his kitchen...
the walls are brown and pasty from the years of smoke...
and the smell of mold causes his lungs to just choke...
he stammers over to the table and sees a small orange bottle...
and jus like that the addiction has went from stationed to throttled...
the boy piks up the bottle and observes the content...
and hes sad and depressed cause he dont know where his mom went...
so he grips the bottle and pries open the safety...
cause he sees his dad poopin 3 a day lately...
he figures itll make him feel better that his mommy had passed...
so he swallows down 3 and drinks down some water in glass...
he feels nuthing cept warm water flow down to his belly...
so bein a child he wants some peanut butter and jelly...
but theres none left no and why cause of his daddys addiction...
he spent up all the money and looked to welfare for support and his wishin...
his dad is upstairs dead with the lead in the palm of his hand...
this cravin for drugs made this boys future drop from the plan...
the lead isnt lead from a bullet or a gun...
nah its these circles you pop wit your thumb...
they go down in your throat and feed on this hunger...
but meanwhile the addiction roars through your body like thunder...
you want more so you score wit the dealer on 7'th and west...
little to know this pill would end up in your little boys chest...
its sad to know now his future has gone straight diminished...
cause this boys next to full from this bottle hes finished...
he retreats back to the couch to watch the tv...
where he hears the lyrics take this pot if you wana be me...

ok this was written to the beat by eminem the way i am and i duno how to make structure wit these new battles so please excuse that but this fits to the beat of the way i am so dont say these rhymes are childish cause they flow wit tha beat i didnt purposely make it rhyme every two lines