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Old 05-28-05, 10:24 PM   #6
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Drive to your 9 to 5…and sing along to the radio…sorry to break your heart fool
Not talking bout the Network, when I say as far as you’ll get in rap is Car-Toons
^^decent opener, not to hard hitting or personal thou............7/10
You want Publicity? Sorry, you’ll never get it in music…so switch grinds
Getting smacked with Cordoroy Pillows is the only way you’ll make HeadLines
^^nice bar, setup lacked............................................ .7.5/10
HotShh is a fake son...Honesty isnt exceeding in his catagories of Fire B
Thats why he sits on top of Pinnochios face...and yells out "Lie To Me"
^^nah, wasnt feeling this bar......................................5/10
Hotshh is wack and that’s that…he seems so hopeless if you’ll notice
persue your dreams Hot, and end up like lice on bald men…homeless
^^decent bar............................................... .............6/10
Son attends counseling...admitting his RV problems; "Marv's Gay" he boasts
im sorry to inform you..Hard-Ons from Marv's beef doesnt count as personal growth
^^nah, this was rather weak......................5/10
Read Hot's Shh backwards..he's about to come clean cause every man should
Hot uses the best TacTics on RV!..i mean he's Dislexic..but his Breathe smells Damn Good!
tictacs, blah blah, got it but it wasnt much of a closer man...5/10

a couple decent bars, but your verse veared off near the end
creativity was pretty good for the most part, personals were
weak thou.....a little too stretched......35.5/60
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As I Begin to Merk You, stop your flows til your Skin is Purple
Edit ya Title......... You're now "Outside of the Winners Circle"
^^ok play.................6/10
Your skill is low in text, couldnt 'deal a king' if you Load the Deck
Your in a "field" of "danger" ....even Rodney show you No Respect
^^lol,.decent line..............7/10
U'll leave this round with no fame just ashamed and Embarrassed
Check your rank, Willy...only your CREW name is "Established"
^^eh, couldve been better...........5/10
And thats no dissing on your clique, it aint nothing they Provoked
Just the fact they let you in..... proves that they can 'Take a Joke'
^^nice bar...................8/10
Why you gloating on that shitty verse for Common you Posted
You dont invent, U "Invek" and take the credit when he Wrote It*
^^lol,....hmmm,...6/10
So whether its Genocide...... Lucifer..... Wet Willy or Buddha
We wont stop at RB, soon you'll be banned from your Computer
^^eh, this was blah.....4/10
So if Willy say he "dropped fire"....... he's Replacing Employers
You couldnt take "a tourney" home... if you was Dating a Lawyer!
^^nice............8/10
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good verse, shit was pretty consistent, closer was nice
some fillers in there thou that i wasnt fellin.....44/70

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!