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Adam
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IP:
I'm not hate voting, your punch sucked.
Chris's Stylez are played, n i'm not sure whats worse
How bad is was BEFORE, or AFTER you bit the other dudes veruse
First off, read what you write before you post it so you don't look so fucking dumb. Your punch should have been written out like this..
Chris's Stylez are played and I'm not sure what's worse,
How bad he was BEFORE or AFTER he bit the other dude's verse.
Okay, secondly, why are you emphasizing "BEFORE" and "AFTER"? They aren't involved with any wordplay or anything that has to be noticed so it just looks retarded and newbish.
Now, all that basic shit aside and on to the punch content. The first line is nothing but an over used statement and a shitty opener to connect with. The second line doesn't even make sense due to your spelling mistakes and your way of addressing the audience of what should have been "he" but for some reason you wrote "is" and than switching up a few words later to "you" changing how the punch should be read. As for saying he bit something, nobody has a clue to what your talking about because you provided no evidence of this ever happening and it has never been a huge topic of discussion other than being mentioned in the mag a while back. Well in case you didn't notice, the league is full of new members who don't have a clue about that mag and that mag was suffering from activity as it was already, so this basically makes your punch next to impossible to understand and it's poorly written. Also it's fucking over a day late and still whack.
As for the other punch, it was just better, I don't feel like breaking it down too, just know that it actually connected and was some what funny.
Vote: Chris Stylez
Explained reasoning for my vote, no hate.
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