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Old 07-03-04, 03:25 AM   #23
fluidmoon
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B20: u had good flow, ur structure was put together well, u had good personals(graduation bit)and off his name, it was decent.But u took it with ur wordplay and ur punches off his name...
murderous:ur structure was off a bit, u didnt need the spacing and u could have come harder..it sounded like u was just rhymin to rhyme and not compete...but i got all love seriously......VOTE:B20
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