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Originally Posted by M Eazy

Listening...
Lyrically simple! Flow on point, not really any energy on this track. You dont have a rapping voice, you should put more anger in it. You sound kinda soft. (whoever on first verse)
Second verse, a lil better, still kinda simple. Better than the first one tho. Flow is on point also, You held the track.

Beat choice is coo, a nice diss track. This diss or whatever aint all that. Hook is kinda wack in all honestly. Ok track. Nothin I would listen to, but still coo!

You are why RV is gay.
You lack comprehension skills.

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Originally Posted by strobe

If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious