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Old 05-21-04, 04:31 PM   #7
JSmoove
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From: Texas
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Good Battle both of yous..... now for da breakdown:

DaLyrical: Nice stucture and good consistant flow. Your shit kept buldin' from beginning to end. Your punches were on point. This is what battlin' is all about. You came wit it from the jump. Good opener.... I especially like the line about jabbing holes like excalibur...nice. Toward the end you slacked off a bit and the intensity in the beginning fell off. Nevertheless, you did enuf to finish balla69.

Balla: Structure was weak, and your flow was inconsistent. Opener was weak. Your nicest verse was "yo rymes are mo played out than flannels/
you got mo bitch in you than the lifetime channel/". The rest of you lines were...um...wack! Keep battlin' and elevate!

Win: DaLyricalVillain
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