iite listenin...
...i understand ya gotta talk at the intro cuz its a diss, buts thats a lil too much talkin...liek i prolly said b4, you gotta unique voice, its tite...good emotion....nice delivery....flow is okay but falls off in spots...lyrics are good....pretty good for such a short piece...keep it up...
*im commenting on the overall song, not the topic*
rtf
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