The beat is fa sho a dope one. first thing I noticed was your quality and your pronounciation was off....quality, you need to learn how to mix a lil better and the hook needs to stand out a lil more. your lines are streched way to much and that might be the reason to why your pronounciation is so horrible. this is the best you've done yet but I still think you need to learn a bit more. I didn't really understand what you were trying to say on this track. not really a boasting track or a story track. what is it about?
anyway it's alright keep workin at it man.

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