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Old 06-21-04, 09:37 PM   #19
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Mental - nice nice drop....tight flow on this....vocab was very good....very deep verse with a creative storyline....not a heads on storyline but a complex storyline which is a bit tough to do....but u pulled of the complexity....so good job....only flaw in ur verse was the lines that didnt rhyme....sorta messed up the read....but i could look around that and definantly like your verse....it gets a 9.6/10....

LOT - nice drop also...first off u had good imagery...good vocab but mental's was better....flow was choppy in spots...but for the most part it was decent....stayed on topic...but mental jsut ousted you wit the vocab and flow....give it a 8.8/10...

Vote - Mental

EDIT: ahh just saw all that shit bout crew votes...lot's in my crew....oh well it was honest....u ccan delete it....just wanted to leave feedback at least....
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