IP:
this was a pretty nice piece.....had good emotion....imagry was aiight
atticus had good vocab and wordplay....i like how some lines just flowed right off my tongue........good structure and i liked the topic for this collab......
onestep you flow was good....good emotions....structure was good.....you need to throw in some better vocab....it was good but it coulda been a lil better.......this was a good collab tho
keep it up fellas
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