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Old 10-10-06, 03:48 PM   #11
Soulstice
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[QUOTE=Soulstice]Dude write your verse. I'm keying something now. ill edit the rest in here.

A tree, a tall one, a forest that has never fallen
Thunder and lighting striking down in electric columns
as creatures rest in hollows, owls peer with midnights oculus
Observers creeping
creatures fearing, thinking that this guys ominous
Getting inside Nature's conscienceness. Trying to destroy it
Searching for the hurting, vying to distort it.
Abortion. This man. attempting to kill his habitat, insane right?
He burned trees, and soon after that was made right
He slayed his prey, ripped through shattered rabbit clavicles
Guns popped like rapid magic and things were smacked at will
A catastrophic kill. Deranged madmen tearing down greenlands
I swear it, they're the forces making our trees bend
For absolutely no reason. A small pond of crystal clear water
Will turn to a landfill for our sons and our daughters
And bogs will, burn - factories will rise in their petite places
Animals flee the scene like its make-believe - dreading changes
Red persuasion, bloody requests to leave these concrete jungles
Usher in a new era, and rid us of this obsolete fungus
The system commandeers all us. A brainwashing device
Called advancement, an enchantment thats calling it nice
This dying echosystem, the corporate ladder trying to rid them
When the only rainbow left will continually come from a prism
A prison. An open one, with bars of steel towers, will begin
While the last of the tulips sway and whisper in the wind




PS - Me and Atticus wrote to a topic Tim gave us
"Tulis whisper in the wind"
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Originally Posted by solo poet
soulstice tried out?!..dude we should have snagged that muthafucka!.
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