it was allright but it seems like somehow other bars dont fit but i think this is very sweet.....deep from the heart...thats all poetry is about...u got all the emotions spread out but it would definitely be much better if u got vocabs in it and similes and metaphors and all that figure of speechityshits....but i liked it...keep droppin em'

good luck with u and synikal

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