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Old 12-22-04, 01:36 PM   #11
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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All I gotta do is pull up to this battle and watch his Van Go...
You cant handle this weight like your name was Anna Nicole...
stupid simplicite rhyme scheme u tried though ok but no really good
Battling you is like flow givin me an advance to next round card...
Poppin lyrical steroids couldnt even make your text sound hard...
ok played concept though
You fear me cuz ya cant hear me clearly bitch only has one ear...
Im havin' fun here just gotta appear and this pussy will run clear...
no personal stupid
I aint lyin' to you, your whack - what are you tryin to do...
Every click is denyin' you thats why your buying a crew...*
ok personal he just doesnt try put but prob ur best line
Fuck battling this pussy anyways I want this to be a boxing match...
Then we will see how much this pussy ass bitch be talkin back...
dumb no personal something a new b would use lol
Walkin' Whack, Whats With Wannabe Wigger Writers...
Those are the only W you goin to see, unless you be a biter...
simple rhyme scheme had potential to be a really good closer if worded diferently
i felt u lacked good personals vocab


Twelve lines to destroy this faggot, no need I can end this battle in eight
Your making all of RV bulimic, we read your text and then we regurgitate
ok vocab in this line not really funny not a good opener
I see by your avy you like weed, consider my punches chronic to the chest
Gkillaz I knew that you was slow, but really studying 5 days for a urine test?
funny good personal
I peeped your verses kid, there extra light on the punches heavy on the fillers
I figured if I tied Wheaties to your waist, at least then you'd be a Cereal Killer
yea nice concept could ahev been worded a lil better but pretty good funny yet kinda played
You remind me of candy kid, cuz I could really take you out "Now or Later"
Man you couldn't get a party pumped with cocaine and a pocket defibrillator *
funny ok wordplay pretty good
It's like the twelve days of xmas and on the 10th day RV gave to me
A kid whose got no chance of winning, just a fake eminem wannabe
not tht good but it is almost xmas time lol and well it was funny
So like Em said "There's no denying my weenie is much bigger than yours
Mine is like sticking a banana between your mamas tits, killa keep the oranges
that was hilarious lol could be better if worded right yet still dope
u kinda lacked personals too vocab was better u just cam more original thats y im voting for u good job to both
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