C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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Hmm.. This really wasn't that bad. But you should try 2 show more expression. Like how and what u appreciate of the smal ittle things she does 4 u.. Or like use deep vocabulary 2 better experss your emotions and thankfulness towards her. Seems like ur just starting so its not that bad. Good luck.. Jst keep writting n ull improve..
-chris
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