I'm feeling this one. Chorus was tight....effects and everything. In the beginning it sounded like you were holding back a bit......not sure exactly what it was, but maybe it sounded like you were trying to save your breath for later. This track is little trebly.....try adding some lows or taking away some highs (look at me thinking I know what I'm talking about). You could hear a lot of your breath spots as well. If you don't use a condenser at all, use a sock or something......it will hide a lot of your breaths

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