Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles"
^decent flow, ok pun

Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen
Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween"
^nyce personal, good metta

You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat??
When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!!
^nyce wordplay & good personal

Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed
Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands"
^nah not feeling da concept

All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun
But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" *
^good wordplay, culd ov used da ending punchline alot better

Good verse here dawg, nyce flow throughout, few good personalz in yo verse. poretty decent wordplay throughout, punbches were nuthin special but u certainly did enough 2 get diz win, hands down, really good job..


Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang
If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame
^self glory, very weak second line

cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances
you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances
^baarely even a diss, u on sum freestyle shit, think through ur disses

ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt
ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt
^very weak again

dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation
yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination
^probably ur best bar, styll wasnt nyce tho

that verse is a wreck... and now im through
im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2
^first line wuz 2 short, 2nd line wuz 2 stretch, not a good personal

Very weak verse, u had no wordplay ithin ur rhymes, punches were non-existant, & u came very basic wit ur flow, all rhymes dat i seen b4 juz worded diffrently, nuthin at all on a personal level, step ur rap game up dawg, u on sum lil jon rhyme scheme lol

Vote-BARZ OF STEEL, EZ WIN...SELF EXPLANATORY IN FACT LOL

rtf, vote honestly & explain it plz. links in da signature

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